Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Expand your grammar and improve your technical writing

From "Engineering Windows 7: Disk Defragmentation":



"Note that a concept that is relatively simple to understand, such as the amount of fragmentation and its impact, is in reality much more complex, and its real impact requires comprehensive evaluation of the entire system to accurately address."



"Note that a concept that is relatively simple to understand, such as the amount of fragmentation and its impact, is in reality difficult to grok."

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